"Simplify Your Resume"


Copyright © 2000 by Kevin Donlin

About 150 years ago, Henry David Thoreau had two things to say that can help you write a better resume today. They are: "Simplify! Simplify!"

You've heard many times that you have only 15-30 seconds to impress readers of your resume. So, the simpler and easier-to-read you can make it, the better.

Here are three ways to do just that.

1. Begin with clarity.
I'm always amazed by the number of resumes that begin with no objective or summary statement. As a result, the employer is forced to start reading without knowing what the applicant can do.

Many resumes begin by listing education, for example. But even if your degree is in high demand, such as computer science, you're still leaving room for misinterpretation (Does this person want a job in network administration? Telephone support? Internal help desk?)

Instead, try opening with an objective such as this: "Position in network administration where my computer science degree and technical skills will add value."

If you want to be more flexible about the job you're after, you can say: "Position where my computer science degree, troubleshooting skills and customer service experience will add value."

2. Group information logically.
Hurried readers want to quickly scan through your resume. You can help them by breaking things down into logical groupings. Don't jumble things together, as in this example:

Windows NT 4.0 Workstation, Windows NT 4.0 Server, MS Exchange, DOS, Windows 95/98, MS Word, MS Excel, MS Access, MS Outlook.

Break longer lists into smaller bits and give them a clear heading, like this:

COMPUTER SKILLS
* Operating Systems - Windows NT 4.0 (Workstation and Server), Windows 95/98 and DOS.
* Applications - Microsoft Exchange, Word, Excel, Access and Outlook.

3. Focus on results.
To make it easier for your reader to picture you achieving results on the job for him/her, clearly show how you've done it for others. Be as specific as possible.

Avoid dry language, like this:
* Responsible for maintaining accurate inventory, acquisition and delivery of supplies.

Try saying this, instead:
* Vastly improved customer service while cutting costs 24% by accurately managing inventory, acquisitions and deliveries.

Simple is good. When you begin your resume with clarity, group your information logically and focus on results, you'll enjoy a simply wonderful job search.

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10-Minute Résumé Makeover

 

Copyright © 2000 by Kevin Donlin

I'd like to tell you about a fast, easy way to make a dramatic improvement in your résumé. It's this: Ask a trusted friend to read it.

Sound obvious? If it were, I wouldn't see misspellings and grammatical errors in the dozens of résumés people send me every week. These are written by literate people, just like you and me. But most folks are simply too involved with the story of their résumés to accurately judge the contents. They miss the forest for the trees, as it were. They fail to see mistakes in spelling or grammar that are obvious to someone else reading their résumé for the first time. Which can cause the phone to NOT ring for a very long time…

That's why it's crucial to get a second opinion from someone you trust.

When your friend is reading your résumé, ask him or her to check these areas: the accuracy of commas, periods and hyphens; spacing between words; spelling of words; and the overall meaning of the document.

A spell checker won't spot the difference between there, their and they're, but your reader will! So ask your friend to circle every word that isn't 100% clear. This will help you produce a résumé that's 100% accurate!

There are other areas, but these are where most mistakes occur. Best of luck to you!

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5 Résumé Mistakes
That Can Kill Your Career


Copyright © 1999 by Kevin Donlin

As a professional résumé writer with 11 years of writing, hiring and managing experience, I've seen the same mistakes time and again in résumés.

Mistakes in your résumé can damage or even kill your career. Because a sub-standard résumé can prevent you from ever being called for a job interview.

But don't worry! If your résumé isn't 100% perfect, you're not alone. And help is just below, in this article.

Here are the five mistakes that ruin most résumés (and what you can do to prevent them).

Mistake #1: No objective or summary.
By not describing what job or field you want to work in, you start your résumé off on the wrong foot. Why? You force the employer to read it all the way through to figure out what kind of job you're suited for. You create more work for your busy reader. This is the last thing you want to do!

If you know the exact job title you're applying for, say so! Start the résumé like this:

OBJECTIVE
Marketing Manager, where 10 years of sales, marketing and management experience will add value to operations.

What if you don't know the job title? Start your résumé like this:

SUMMARY
Seeking a position where 10 years of sales, marketing and management experience will add value to operations.

By starting your résumé with a clear objective or a focused summary, you tell the reader exactly what you want to do for him or her. This establishes a rapport and sets the stage for the résumé. Which will greatly improve your results.

Mistake #2: Focusing on you and your needs.
This is the worst mistake you can make. Unfortunately, it's also the most common.

Look, no employer wants to hire you. Employers hate hiring! They only hire employees when they have problems to solve. And no employer wants to spend a lot of time hiring you, either, just as you wouldn't want to spend more time in a dentist's chair than you had to.

So, your résumé must quickly answer the one question that's on every employer's mind: "What can you do for me?"

Unfortunately, most résumés don't.

Most résumés start out like this: "Seeking a position where I can utilize my skills in an atmosphere with potential for career advancement ..." And so on. This sounds fine and logical to the person writing the résumé. But it completely alienates the person READING the résumé. Because this person -- your potential employer -- has his own problems. He could care less about your career aspirations or desire to make more money.

Instead, tell the employer how you can add value to his/her operations, or contribute to efficiency. Notice this opening summary again:

SUMMARY
Seeking a position where 10 years of sales, marketing and management experience will add value to operations.

Now, what employer wouldn't want to talk to someone like you, who's offered to add value to his operations? You could also say: "... will contribute to operations" or "... will add to profitability." The exact words don't matter. What does matter is your focus on helping the employer meet his goals. If you do that, your career will advance and you'll make more money.

Mistake #3: Focusing on responsibilities instead of results. While it's important to tell the reader what you've done at each job, it's far more important to spend most of your time talking about what you accomplished and how you made yourself valuable to past employers.

It's easy to do. Just think back on your daily duties. What good things happened when you did your job well? Write them down! Focus on results. The more specific, the better!

Instead of saying this: "Responsibilities included (but were not limited to) implementation of policies and procedures, training of new employees, interfacing with subordinates and vendors, and light correspondence duties."

Say this: "Worked with staff and vendors to increase product turnover by 15% and sales by 23% in five months. Also trained 14 new employees, five of whom were rapidly promoted."

Mistake #4: Too many big words. It's a shame how often a good résumé is ruined when the author utilizes a superabundance of polysyllabic terminology, or uses too many big words.

Don't hide behind your vocabulary. When your résumé is not clear and to the point, the reader gets bored, time is wasted and your résumé goes in the trash.

Simplify! Write as if you were talking to a class of sixth grade students. That's the reading level all journalists are trained to appeal to in their writing. If it works for America's newspapers, it ought to work for you.

Instead of saying "implemented," try "adopted" or "set up," for example.

Never "utilize" what you can simply "use."

Don't "interface" with people; "work" with them.

And never use "impact" as a verb. (Meteorites hitting the moon are about the only thing that should "impact.") Try "affect" instead.

Mistake #5: Spelling/punctuation errors. Your spell-checker is not enough! You must read through the résumé once for accuracy (numbers, dates, city names, etc.), once for missing/extra words, and once more for spelling.

Then, show your résumé to several friends and ask them to read it out loud. Listen to where they pause; this could mean you've written something confusing or inaccurate. After you get their feedback, revise the résumé so that it's 100% error-free.

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Career Change
Résumés & Cover Letters


Copyright © 2000 by Kevin Donlin

Career changes are common today. And challenging.

If you're like most people trying to switch careers, you've had a hard time writing an effective résumé and cover letter. Because to do so, you have to prove you have the skills and/or experience to do a job that's very different from what you've done before.

Here's how to make that career switch by writing a résumé and cover letter that get results.

1. Consider taking a half-step toward a new career.
Let's say you're an administrative assistant ... who wants to be a lion tamer. You can certainly try to move right into lion taming and write a résumé that emphasizes those skills.

But another way would be to get a job as an administrative assistant at a company employing lion tamers. Once inside, you can try for an internal promotion to lion taming after you've had a chance to learn from those on staff.

2. Avoid functional résumés.
The functional résumé, which usually lists "skills" or "areas of expertise," followed by a sparse career history, is the kiss of death.

Why?

It's used by job seekers to hide something in their past, which is a red flag for most hiring managers.

So, what résumé format works best?

3. Try a hybrid format.
Write a résumé that mixes relevant skills, achievements and experience, with your most valuable points near the beginning.

You could lead with a tailored objective, like this: OBJECTIVE "Position in lion taming where skills in communication and a strong knowledge of animal control will add value."

Then, follow with a PROFILE section, where you define and develop the 2-4 skills or areas of expertise you offer. These can come from anywhere in your career -- a degree you completed last month or a hobby that makes you an expert.

If room allows, follow with a SELECTED ACHIEVEMENTS section, where you can include 2-4 bullet points describing the best things you've done related your target job. You can include achievements from paid or volunteer work, hobbies or education.

Then follow with your EDUCATION/TRAINING or EXPERIENCE section, depending on which is more relevant to your new career.

Be sure to include dates, explain any gaps and write in language that fits your next job.

4. Use your cover letter to really state your case.
If you show enthusiasm in your cover letter and make it easy for the reader to see that you have the potential to succeed in a new career, your chances of doing so are much improved!

Taken together, a résumé that makes it easy for employers to see your relevant skills, combined with a hard-hitting cover letter, can help make your career change a success.

Best of luck to you!

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How to Make and Use
a Scannable Résumé


Copyright © 1999 by Kevin Donlin

If you've been reading the classified ads in the Sunday paper lately, you've probably seen this phrase: "Send scannable résumé and cover letter to ...."

What's a scannable résumé, you ask?

Today, approximately 50% of larger companies use optical character recognition (OCR) software to scan résumés into computerized databases. Once scanned in, hiring managers and HR people search through these résumés for keywords to match applicants with jobs.

So, in many cases, a computer will see your résumé before a human does.

What does this mean for you? It means you need to make and send a scannable résumé when applying to large corporations. This article will show you how.

First, create your scannable résumé.

Start by changing the typeface in your résumé to a sans serif font, such as Arial, for more accurate reading by the scanning computer. (Serif fonts, such as Times Roman, may not scan as clearly.) Use a single typeface throughout and a single font size. I recommend 10 or 11 point type.

Next, eliminate all underlining, bolding and italics, which make your résumé harder to scan and read.

After that, create a targeted keyword section to match your career goals. Keywords are the nouns an employer uses when looking through the database of scanned résumés for candidates like you. If your scannable résumé is rich in matching keywords, it's more likely that your résumé will pop up in the search ... and you'll be called for an interview.

Try to think like the employer and anticipate the keywords they'll search for. Then put those keywords in your résumé. Example: a company looking to hire a C++ programmer will look for evidence of programming skills and education. The following keywords should go in your scannable résumé (if they apply to you): C, C++, BS: Computer Science, program, programming, programmer, code, coding, software development, software developer.

Put your keyword section near the top of your résumé, right after your opening objective or summary statement.

Print your scannable résumé on plain white paper for best results. Save the fancy stationery for your standard résumé.

Congratulations! You now have a scannable résumé, ready to go. But how do you submit it to employers?

Here are two tricks that will improve your results.

I recommend to all my clients that they send BOTH a scannable résumé and a traditional résumé (the one with an eye-pleasing layout, printed on high-grade business stationery). When you send both types of résumés, you prove your understanding of technology by providing one résumé for people to read, and one for the computers. You make the employer's job a lot easier, which can go a long way toward producing a job for you!

Second, as an added touch, put a sticky note on your scannable résumé to identify it. Simply writing "Scannable Résumé" on your note should do it.

That's it. There's really no big mystery about creating a scannable résumé. But you do have to choose your keywords wisely. I've been writing scannable résumés since 1996, and my clients have enjoyed tremendous success using them. I wish you the same success in your job search!

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How Do I Create an ASCII Résumé?


Copyright © 1998 by Kevin Donlin

Question

Help! I saw a job posting on a Web site and it said to send an ASCII version of my résumé. What is ASCII and how do I do I create an ASCII version of my résumé?


Answer

ASCII (pronounced "AS-key") stands for American Standard Code for Information Interchange. It's another term for plain text and it can be read cleanly by any computer, which is why so many employers ask that you have one available.

It's easy to convert your résumé from Word, WordPerfect or other word processing software to ASCII. Here's how:

1) Save your résumé as text only. This will eliminate most of the fancy formatting that separates an ASCII document from word processing documents.

2) Open this new text-only version of your résumé using Notepad or your computer's text editing software. Do not open it with word processing software.

3) Read over your résumé to look for stray characters that don't translate into ASCII; they usually appear as black boxes in the text. In most cases, you're looking for smart quotes and long "em" dashes. Replace these with "dumb quotes" (" ") and double hyphens (--). Once the text looks clean, save and close the file.

That's it. You now have an ASCII version of your résumé to send by e-mail to any employer who asks for it. Good luck!

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How to E-mail Your Résumé


Copyright © 1999 by Kevin Donlin

Many of you write to ask about how to e-mail your résumé to employers. The problem is often this -- sometimes, when you send your résumé to companies by e-mail, they write back saying the document was garbled or not attached to the e-mail correctly. If employers can't read your résumé, how are they going to hire you?

This can make you look all thumbs when it comes to technology. Worse, it can bring your job search to a screeching halt. So, how do you make sure your e-mailed résumé is readable?

Here's how.

Most people send their resume either as an attachment or in the body of an e-mail message. But, for maximum results and minimum headaches, I recommend that you do both.

First, send your résumé as an attachment. Almost all e-mail programs (Eudora, AOL e-mail, etc.) let you send attachments, which are documents that ride along with the e-mail. When the reader gets your e-mail, they can "open" (download and read) whatever document you have attached. Word for Windows is the most popular word processor (to my knowledge), so use this format for your attached résumé, if possible. WordPerfect is another good choice.

But attachments aren't foolproof. They may get scrambled during transmission and become impossible to open. Or, the reader may not have the same word processor as you, preventing them from reading your attached résumé. Then there's the old Mac/PC problem -- if your résumé was written in a Macintosh format, it won't be readable by a PC (and vice versa).

So, to make sure everyone can read your résumé, you should also copy and paste the text into the body of your e-mail message. In your word processor, simply highlight the entire text of your résumé, and copy it into the clipboard (short-term memory). Then, switch over to your e-mail program and paste the text into your message.

That's it! When you e-mail your résumé as both an attachment and with the text in the message itself, you can be certain that one way or another, your résumé will get read. Good luck!


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5 Résumé Myths


Copyright © 1999 by Kevin Donlin
I'd like to talk about five résumé myths that can trip you up. These myths are commonly passed around by friends, co-workers and other well-meaning folks. But they're just that -- myths. And they can stand in the way of real progress in your job search.

Myth #1 -- Your résumé must be one page long.

Reality -- A two-page résumé can be just as effective as a one-page resume, if it's an interesting read. And in highly technical fields, such as programming or biological research, a two-page résumé is often necessary to tell your full story.

Avoid exceeding two pages unless your situation absolutely Demands it. A college president with 20+ years of experience might need a three-page résumé. The rest of us don't. For what it's worth, since 1995 I've written exactly two résumés that were longer than two pages ....

Myth #2 -- You shouldn't use abbreviations in your résumé.

Reality -- It's perfectly acceptable to abbreviate words like "division" (div.), "department" (dept.), "company" (co.), "university" (univ.), etc. in order to save space. Just be sure you're consistent -- if you abbreviate a word once, you should abbreviate it the same way again.

Myth #3 -- Your résumé must list and describe every job you've ever had.

Reality -- It's OK to summarize earlier or irrelevant employment. For most people, it's best to focus on experience since 1980-1985. Dates earlier than that can mark you as "over-qualified" or "over-paid," depending on your industry. Just be sure to NEVER include false information. If you didn't graduate from college, don't claim a degree! Instead, you can say: "BA: Business course work, Large State University (three years)."

Myth #4 -- You should include references in your résumé .

Reality -- NEVER include references in your résumé. Why?

You want to have control over when your references are called. If you include them in your résumé, an employer can contact them without your knowledge. You won't have time to prep them on the job you're seeking and the questions they might be asked.

As a follow-up to this, it's really understood that you have references (just as it's understood that you dial "1" before making a long-distance call). You can use that space to talk more about how you can help an employer. So, delete this tired phrase from your résumé: "References available upon request."

Myth #5 -- If your résumé is good enough, it should produce a job offer.

Reality -- The job of your résumé is not to get you a job directly, although that has happened with some of my clients. The job of your résumé is to make the phone ring (or your e-mail box fill up) and land you a job interview. It's YOUR job to prepare for that interview and land the job offer.

Your résumé should generate so much interest among employers that they would have to be insane not to pick up the phone and call you. To that end, you don't want to tell the reader your entire work history in agonizing detail -- you can always elaborate during a job interview.

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Toot Your Horn
Without Blowing It


Copyright © 2000 by Kevin Donlin

Do you have trouble talking about yourself and your achievements in a resume? You're not alone!

Here's a sampling of the comments I get every week from people who have a hard time selling themselves on paper:

"It's not in my character to tell the whole story of my achievements very well."
"I'm just a humble Midwesterner -- I have a hard time tooting my own horn."

No matter where you live or what your career, it can be difficult to describe your achievements without feeling as if you're bragging. It can be especially uncomfortable if you haven't written a resume before.

But if you don't toot your horn, who's going to hear you, much less hire you?

As countless deodorant and mouthwash commercials have drilled into our heads, you don't get a second chance to make a first impression. So, fire all of your guns in every resume and cover letter you send out.

Good news -- even the tasks and skills you take for granted have potential value to employers.

To illustrate, here's a bullet point I wrote today for a client who wants to move from nursing to pharmaceutical sales.

* Proven communication skills. Expert at building trust and consulting with physicians.

This woman spends all day assisting doctors in a busy hospital. To her, it's a given that she won't waste a doctor's time. She has to be concise and serve as a resource when talking to physicians. Surprise! These qualities are exactly what companies are looking for in a pharmaceutical sales rep. So I emphasized them in her resume.

What do you do and what have you done that's attractive to employers?

Take a few minutes during lunch today to list every skill you use and every bit of value you create. Assume nothing -- write it all down.

Then take a look at some want ads that appeal to you. Do you see a match between what employers want and what you can offer? I'm sure you can.

So, toot your horn and get ready for the phone to ring.

Best of luck to you!

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